Greed
The day he destroyed his violin, Jacob wandered through the museum, staring. So far from his home planet, everything looked strange.
In the courtyard, he came across delicate, frosted glass bones of the behemoths. Its wings had been transformed into sun-catchers. There was a musical instrument made from its sinews. Jacob plucked at a string. It sounded like bells. He plucked again, and this time heard singing. The sound was never the same, and it was always achingly beautiful.
On the plaque, it said, “Behemoths were exterminated for their sinews, which are used in musical instruments all over the galaxy.”
Photo prompt © Roger Bultot
neilmacdon said:
I want one
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Sandra said:
I could almost hear those sounds.
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Jane Dougherty said:
Lovely story! Delicate and poetic, and such a heart-breaking ending.
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J. E. Kennedy said:
So beautiful and sad. I want to cry for the behemoths.
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rochellewisoff said:
Dear Jennifer,
Atmospheric and lyrical, sad for the behemoths. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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michael1148humphris said:
A powerful message. Recalling a horrific trade.
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mumpoet said:
Very sad and an important message about how we exploit other living things for our pleasure – sad to think this won’t change, even in the future. A cruel truth told here. Lovely!
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J Hardy Carroll said:
Love the irony in this piece.
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Balaka said:
Behemoths and the music..great take on the prompt
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James said:
I too thought of the bones of aliens but then went in a different direction. This is kind of like killing elephants for their ivory, isn’t it?
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Iain Kelly said:
Interesting take on the prompt, nicely written.
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palfreyman1414 said:
Excellent and emotional use of the pic to create a wonderful set of thoughts. Ta for this.
(FWIW I’d change two or three of the words to make it tighter, but it is still wonderful as it stands.)
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pennygadd51 said:
A beautiful and tragic story. It’s lovely to read and imagine the wonderful sounds, but they’re poisoned by knowing that this caused the behemoths to become extinct. It asks very profound questions; even, “Should we eat meat?”
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jennifermacaire said:
Thank you for all your kind comments! They have warmed my heart!
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
What a wonderful and magic story… I’m left with questions that don’t need answers (which I love)… the sinew of the behemoth sounds magic
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Dale said:
Why is it the most beautiful creatures end up extinct? We just can’t get enough… lovely entry.
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anuragbakhshi said:
So poignant, and such an important lesson for the new year.
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neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS said:
Very atmospheric.
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Dan Bohn said:
I love the achingly beautiful tones, but I would miss the Behemoths. Damn exterminators.
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Jelli said:
Oh, man, I’m not going to be able to look at the bow of my new violin the same ever again. Everytime I pick it up to play, the sound seems to come out of my very soul in a scream. Hopefully, after a few lessons and practice, that scream will become a song. love your story.
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Keith's Ramblings said:
This is simply delightful.
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granonine said:
So creative. A sad, haunting, but lovely story.
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Jan Brown said:
Lovely story. For some reason, the photo made me think of music, too!
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Sascha Darlington said:
So sad!
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rachelmalik99 said:
Really like the melancholy of this – very beautiful.
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